Published January 29, 2006
i am a frog
who challenged a god
the battle was rough
but he was too tough
in the end , i fell and died
on the dusty earth i lied
this , the story of me,me
mohamed ali
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i didn't get this, but, then again, i don't know much about muhamed ali, so i suppose i should just fall back into silence. the rhythm wasn't dead or anything, though - if i understood it, i'm sure it would be good.... if that's any condolence.
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This was really good it reminded me of a book i read by Terry Pratchett. It was kindof nonsensical.